Dr Brownley-Dietician:
Dr Brownley was a Dietician and all she have to do is helps with your health
Scarlett-Anorexic:
She was losing too much weight
Mum-not encouraging
She was not helping Scarlett
Thursday, 12 May 2016
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Hi Ammie, I really like the way you have explained the characters and what they do in the story maybe next time be more creative in your layout and presentation so it attracts your viewers.
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